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Post by Deleted on Aug 24, 2013 16:30:17 GMT -5
I see you up there with the others.
Although you all look the same from here, I know it's you.
So why won't you speak to me? Darkstorm 13 moons · Male · PineClan · warrior ∙ straight ∙ image- Pelt: black, long fur
- Eyes: yellow
- Build: average size with strong, broad shoulders
- Other: deep tear in his left ear, and long whiskers
- Brief Description: long furred, black tom
appearance - General: How Darkstorm acts around others depends on how he's feeling. He can be pretty social and makes jokes at times, and other times he can be extremely serious and reserved. He can be very loyal and expects others to be loyal to him in return. He can lash out at times and can keep a grudge.
- Things Darkstorm Enjoys
- seeing others happy
- knowing his clan is safe
- feeling secure
- Things Darkstorm Hates
- change
- anything that hurts him mentally
- hubris
- Darkstorm's Habits
- Since he hates being upset he tends to silently blame others.
- Darkstorm's Positive Traits
- good at giving advice
- good listener
- talented fighter
- Darkstorm's Negative Traits
- acts before he thinks
- overprotective
- doesn't trust others (while wanting them to trust him)
personality - History: Dark-kit was born into a litter of three, his two siblings being Mousekit, a tom, and Goldenkit, a molly. They grew up without a father, and it was unclear to them why. By the way their mother, a cat named Paleface, talked it was obvious their father was still alive. Paleface said he was too busy for kits at the time. For the three kits that translated into: he didn't want kits. Dark-kit took this especially hard, but tried to hide it from his littermates. He didn't want to upset them. It was clear that he was upset, though- whenever curious talk or rumors spread up about his father his attitude would immediately turn for the worse. After about two months Mousekit caught greencough and died. Being unsure about how to handle his emotions, he didn't talk to anyone for a few days- his silence only being broken by Goldenkit convincing him to help her pull a prank on the apprentices (placing a bunch of burrs in their den and bedding while they were out training). The two were scolded, but Paleface was glad that Dark-kit was talking and seemingly happy again. Nearing their fifth moon, Paleface also died of greencough. Watching over them on their last moon in the nursery was shared between the lasting queens in the clan.
Darkpaw and Goldenpaw became apprentices at 6 moons, the usual. These two liked to compete with each other a lot during their apprenticeship- but not on their training. No, their competition was to see who could pull the best prank. Looking at their training they both did well. Goldenpaw was an excellent hunter with a great sense of balance. Darkpaw was better at fighting, although he was a decent hunter. He couldn't come to trust the branches as much as Goldenpaw did, so he preferred hunting ground prey. This is also the time when Darkpaw started to joke around a lot, also enjoying to drop confusing hints to his sister as to what his next prank would be. She considered herself better than that, never giving him a single glance as to when or what her next trick could be. They could go to sleep completely normal, and the next morning wake up to find burrs in his pelt. Darkpaw's best prank was when he tried to convince Goldenpaw that she was invisible, getting most of the clan to play along with him (it was ruined when one of the less playful warriors informed Goldenpaw what was happening). Goldenpaw's greatest prank was waking up Darkpaw by scaring him- claiming their was a snake in their den. Darkpaw woke up to find a thick stem on his side, for a second he was surprised enough to believe her. It didn't last.
Later on in their apprenticeship came the hunting assessment. Darkpaw was doing well. He had managed to catch a vole, a mouse, and after much struggling he had caught a squirrel by climbing a tree. He had time to catch one more bit of prey, so he was stalking a bird. A distant screech sent it flying away. Darkpaw was surprised as the bird at first, standing stiff as his thoughts decided the direction it had come from. He knew who this was, though. That was Goldenpaw's voice. Still a bit angry about the snake prank, Darkpaw decided this was another joke. He continued to look for another piece of prey to hunt. He only started to doubt himself when Goldenpaw's mentor's yowl cut the air. Without another thought he ran in the direction the sounds were coming from. By then it was too late. Goldenpaw was laying on the ground, covered in blood and not moving. Her mentor was badly injured, and barely able to stand. The fox was gone leaving its stench behind. Darkpaw's mentor helped the injured warrior back to camp while Darkpaw did his best to drag his sister back. He refused to leave her side. After a while Darkpaw's mentor had to fetch the caught prey without his apprentice, so the fox wouldn't take it. A warrior patrol was sent out to take care of the fox, but Darkpaw didn't pay much attention to if they actually got it or not. He didn't blame the fox for what had happened to his sister. He blamed himself for not coming to fight beside her when she needed him. He blamed himself for his ignorance and not believing her. The pranks stopped. For the next moon he spent all of his energy focused on his training, trying not to think about Goldenpaw. Trying not to let it hurt. He failed, letting out his anger on an apprentice from another clan who had accidentally crossed the border. That's how he got the deep tear in his left ear, but the other cat got a bit more markings than he did. He was punished for the "unnecessary" fight, having to take care of the elders for a moon and having his warrior ceremony delayed. This is when he decided that he would have to put Goldenpaw's death behind him and focus on the good of the clan, and the other members of the clan. He started joking around again. It was true he loved to see others happy, because he didn't want them feeling like he did when Goldenpaw died. This is why he also hates being alone, because it gives him time to think about what happened to Goldenpaw- what he never did manage to forgive himself for.
He was made a warrior at 13 moons, despite the fact his training had gone very well. It was a punishment for the fight he had started at the border. He accepted that. He was named Darkstorm, for his quick turning attitude. Now he craves to make Goldenpaw proud, hoping that she could forgive him when it's his turn to walk among the stars.
- Family/Relatives
- Father: unknown
- Mother: Paleface
- Siblings: Mousekit; Goldenpaw
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Post by ★NATSU on Aug 26, 2013 21:35:22 GMT -5
pending! I. History: Hello there welcome to EOTS! I would love to accept you application except your history was overly negative. Also your history mentions greencough, which greencough doesn't exist in this au. Greencough is now Malaria. Try to balance out Darkstorm's history with both good and bad. Reply to the post when you've done corrections. I look forward to seeing you soon<3 |
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